Friday, September 7, 2012

What's my name?

Does my name have a meaning?
yes it does so,
But is that anything for you even to know?
Is my name different from yours?
Most likely, so be it, but that doesn't mean my purpose in life is defeated.
Is your name better than mine because it has an accent and its extravagant compassionate and makes me feel bane and not collaborate?
NO.
Because it doesn't suck to be me,
I made people happy and I've accomplished dreams,
It may seem false but its actually true,
You want to know my name? I'll spell it out for you.

H for my handsome ways
A for my awesome days
L for my loving heart
S for my super smarts
T for my timid times
O for my obnoxious rhymes
N because my goals never end
so now you know my name is. . .
Halston.

My age says im 15,
I'm fit like I'm 35
Rambunctious like I'm 18
and dress like I'm buried alive.

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12 comments:

  1. UnknownSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    I love the ending of your poem. I never really knew that you were such a GREAT writer. Great job

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  2. UnknownSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    You're slick. I love it (: Good job dude.

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  3. India RigginsSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:43 AM

    I loved it! I liked how you spelled your name out after you gave a little introduction and also told about yourself.

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  4. UnknownSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:43 AM

    I LOVEDDDDD YOUR POEM!!!!!!! you should have rapped it!!!!!

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  5. JadenSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:43 AM

    I love everything you write. You're so amazing. <3 I smile everytime I hear you read your writing. You're gonna be a rapper when you grow up c;

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  6. UnknownSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:43 AM

    SO GREAT!!! I loved your rhyme scheme! I like how you compared your name to others. Very nice job! :D

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  7. UnknownSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:44 AM

    ok.... i see you don't like my name, "BUT THATS OKAY!!" very nice and you!

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:44 AM

    I like how you said in your poem that just because your name is different from other people's names doesnt mean that their names are any better than yours

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  9. juarketsquareSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:44 AM

    Halston,
    Great job. I love the rhyming in your first stanza. Fantastic and creative.

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  10. Lanae BanksSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:44 AM

    I LOVED EVERY LETTER! That was really, really good. It was deep yet playful just like you! <3

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  11. MattieSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:45 AM

    Your poem is great. I like the words you used, and the musical feel it has. You should have more confidence in your writing because it's very good!

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  12. UnknownSeptember 13, 2012 at 10:04 AM

    what do you mean by 35? In shape? Out of shape? I can't tell!

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